Kathryn, These are all great drawings and the turning in the hips and should is creating some really strong overlapping forms. Please keep this up. The throw is great because of its dynamism but these all have strong points. I would have added an initial drawing on the first action of the character at rest, quizzically looking down at the object (turtle? squid?) perhaps with a finger to the mouth. It would add to the idea that there is a build up of energy, followed by the crouch to pick up. A less dynamic action like this can benefit from finding as extreme of states as possible. Well done.
Kathryn,
ReplyDeleteThese are all great drawings and the turning in the hips and should is creating some really strong overlapping forms. Please keep this up.
The throw is great because of its dynamism but these all have strong points.
I would have added an initial drawing on the first action of the character at rest, quizzically looking down at the object (turtle? squid?) perhaps with a finger to the mouth. It would add to the idea that there is a build up of energy, followed by the crouch to pick up. A less dynamic action like this can benefit from finding as extreme of states as possible.
Well done.