Kathryn, The first page and last page seem the strongest to me, because the line weight has more fluidity and complements that poses better. The silhouettes are more interesting, too. Watch out to avoid poses where limbs are rigid or set to right angles, as well as ones where the figure is pushed to a profile. Good work.
Kathryn,
ReplyDeleteThe first page and last page seem the strongest to me, because the line weight has more fluidity and complements that poses better. The silhouettes are more interesting, too. Watch out to avoid poses where limbs are rigid or set to right angles, as well as ones where the figure is pushed to a profile.
Good work.