Kathryn, All of these are pretty good - the singer and violinist drawings are outstanding, as is that 2nd pose of the guitarist - great silhouettes, poses where the shoulders and hips are turned on separate axes. The line development is good and the forms and overlap are convincing. My only comment would be to make an effort to develop longer lines and more fluidity in the gestures. Great work.
Kathryn,
ReplyDeleteAll of these are pretty good - the singer and violinist drawings are outstanding, as is that 2nd pose of the guitarist - great silhouettes, poses where the shoulders and hips are turned on separate axes. The line development is good and the forms and overlap are convincing.
My only comment would be to make an effort to develop longer lines and more fluidity in the gestures.
Great work.