Kathryn, For session 1, I like the point of view - it's very convincing. The weight shifts look good - the silhouettes could be a little more unique, though. Be conscious of how you choose the pose. Sometimes, finding poses where the harms are a little more away from the body helps. Also, look at all your hands - they have good form in the metacarpals but the fingers are not given much attention - turning the wrist and posing the hand can help the overall gesture of the arm. For the Columbus Library session, I like all the poses, in terms of weight shift but the same comments apply. Lastly - look how the shoulders, head and hips are all on the same line in these drawings - try to look to poses where that isn't the case. All this being said, your forms are convincing and the line development is pretty good.
Kathryn,
ReplyDeleteFor session 1, I like the point of view - it's very convincing. The weight shifts look good - the silhouettes could be a little more unique, though. Be conscious of how you choose the pose.
Sometimes, finding poses where the harms are a little more away from the body helps. Also, look at all your hands - they have good form in the metacarpals but the fingers are not given much attention - turning the wrist and posing the hand can help the overall gesture of the arm.
For the Columbus Library session, I like all the poses, in terms of weight shift but the same comments apply.
Lastly - look how the shoulders, head and hips are all on the same line in these drawings - try to look to poses where that isn't the case.
All this being said, your forms are convincing and the line development is pretty good.