^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLqEWDo1VQk
^ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y_rtxFTnyWI
^http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbN0nX61rIs&list=LL1gtdObVBUjBzm4S7b6_V0A
^http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WbN0nX61rIs&list=LL1gtdObVBUjBzm4S7b6_V0A
Kathryn,
ReplyDeleteAll of these are really solid beginnings - I would just like to see a little more development. They all feel a little incomplete. The bottom 2 pages have some great gesture to them as the fabric follows the turning shoulders and hips of the subject. If the videos from which you worked were medium shots, just make up the lower body - it will help ground the subject and enhance the gesture.